Fallout Equestria: Armed Redemption

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Ironmonger
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Fallout Equestria: Armed Redemption

Postby Ironmonger » Fri Nov 23, 2012 3:41 pm

Alright, so I don't exactly need proofreading, but I would greatly appreciate it if someone would look over my story and point out any oddities or things I could improve. Most of what I get is lurkers and not much feedback aside from my co-author and idea-guys. :twilightsheepish:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42508/Fallout-Equestria%3A-Armed-Redemption

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