Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby otherunicorn » Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:29 am

Proofread :)

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Mon Jan 16, 2012 4:26 am

Awesome! Thanks a lot, your proofreading has really helped me!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:13 pm

And here is chapter 4!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby otherunicorn » Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:26 pm

done!

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:48 am

I am very glad that you keep pointing out my various errors, it really helps improving the quality!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:48 pm

Chapter 5 is up now! Read, comment, criticise, you know, the usual deal ;)
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby otherunicorn » Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:57 am

Finished :)

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:10 am

Aaaaand fixed. I also couldn't find an alternative for partly and part, sadly.
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Tue Feb 07, 2012 3:47 pm

Chapter 6: Revenge is up for proofreading. I'm afraid I made a bit of a mess out of this one though.
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby otherunicorn » Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:18 pm

I'll get to it when I can, I'm trying to get my own one up for proof reading today too.


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