Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Wed Feb 22, 2012 4:39 pm

What's that? A new chapter? Surely you must be joking!
Nope, here is chapter 7: memories. And my name is not Shirley.

this is what happens when I get too little sleep and no coffee.
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:58 am

At last, after a month of procrastination and a writer's block or two, I managed to finally write this chapter!
Mares and Gentlecolts, I give you... Ashes to Ashes - Chapter 8: New Faces
I highly appreciate comments and all that good stuff, so feel free to do so.
Thanks in advance :3
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Thu May 03, 2012 7:51 am

I'm not dead yet! Nope, still alive and kicking, and to prove it I present Chapter 9: A Day Off!
It's probably full of errors as usual, so proofreading is higly appreciated as always! Hope you enjoy!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby otherunicorn » Thu May 03, 2012 8:27 am

wow! I'll get to it tomorrow. Bed time.

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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Thu May 03, 2012 8:58 am

sure, I see you just updated We're no Heroes too. What perfect timing, I'll make sure to give it a good read too!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:22 am

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asj ... wZ980/edit
it's been a long time, how have you been? I haven't been very busy except for lately. Here is chapter 10 of Ashes to Ashes, it's long, and it's a mess. So any help is highly appreciated!
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