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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby otherunicorn » Sat Jun 30, 2012 5:29 am

All of a sudden, everything I am reading has stopped. Has everyone run out of steam?
Anyway, here is my latest. I hope it was worth the wait.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VSj ... hjJN0/edit

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:08 am

Well, it certainly was! Found a couple of small errors and quite enjoyed this chapter. It also occurs to me that Anne is really, really good at anything mechanical, with the only hard part being the issue of getting close. The villains and heroes are well portrayed, not black and white, but a nice shade of grey. Well done!
Everything will end in sunshine and rainbows!

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Sun Jul 01, 2012 1:50 am

Awesome chapter as always! I started to suspect the ending, but it was even more surprising then I thought! Great work!

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby mimezinga » Sun Jul 01, 2012 1:47 pm

yep, good chapter. keep it going because i like the ride ^_^

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:44 am

Read and commented. I didn't find many issues in this chapter at all. As for the chapter itself, it was great and carried on from the previous chapter very well!

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 20 Proof re

Postby otherunicorn » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:51 am

Thank you. It was an unusual chapter to write.

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 23 Proof re

Postby otherunicorn » Wed Aug 01, 2012 7:21 am

Chapter 23 is up for proof reading.

For what it's worth, I've finally managed to extract the next chapter from my reluctant brain.... :lwalk:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_Yc ... LYpBM/edit

Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 23 Proof re

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:23 am

Read, only a couple comments, very problem free! Good chapter, I'm glad to see the team is coming back together :)

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 23 Proof re

Postby otherunicorn » Thu Aug 23, 2012 4:02 am

Hardest chapter yet. It's taken me 23 chapters to get to this.... what a journey! :lwalk:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nQC ... opJxM/edit

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