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Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes.Epilogue Proofread

Postby otherunicorn » Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:09 am

Epilogue draft is up. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRF ... sp=sharing
Probably full of errors. Has varying tenses (deliberately) Like it, lump it, or make suggestions.
I've been ill for weeks, and I'm sick of sitting on it.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 8 Proof rea

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:00 am

I read through it and made some comments.
I enjoyed reading this one. Good job.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 8 Proof rea

Postby otherunicorn » Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:22 pm

Thank you :)

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Postby Arcane_Scroll » Sat Jan 07, 2012 12:03 am

Finally have free time to read, commenting now.

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea

Postby otherunicorn » Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:55 am

Yay, this chapter was a pain to get out. Part of what I wrote to be in the last chapter was pushed back, first to this chapter, then again to next chapter.
Commentable proof reading copy:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vAA ... A-a58/edit

Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.

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Postby Arcane_Scroll » Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:19 am

Copied from Google docs chat in case you miss it:
Ok, I read through it once, got what I saw. I'll try to do another read through tomorrow if I get time and see if I find anything else.

Great chapter, I like the "perk" :)

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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea

Postby Pinkie Pie! » Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:19 am

Another great chapter!
I had a really hard time finding anything to comment on.
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Postby otherunicorn » Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:27 pm

Thanks for the proofread guys :)

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Postby Arcane_Scroll » Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:21 am

Ok, I left comments. Wow, this was a good chapter!


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