Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

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Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby The Jack » Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:02 pm

The repairpony Rusty Gears never thought his life would be as interesting, as heroic, as that of the Stable Dweller or the Security Mare. What happens when he suddenly thrown into sinister conspiracy? A Fallout: Equestria fanfic.

Chapter one is up on;
Gdocs : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OE8 ... t?hl=en_US
Fanfiction.net : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7582895/1/F ... _Aqua_Pura
Deviantart.com : http://thanos-san.deviantart.com/art/Fa ... -270937914
Fimfiction.net : http://poni.0au.de/story/3316/Fallout%3 ... -Aqua-Pura

I'll also be submitting it to EqD tomorrow.
I know, it's kind of like attention-whoring to submit it to so many places,but... I don't care. xD
I would greatly appreciate any constructive critique and comments you may have! =D
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby DancesOnTheAshes » Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:12 pm

I sent an ask for access if that's okay with you. I'll read it after I'm done tumblring
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby The Jack » Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:03 pm

DancesOnTheAshes wrote:I sent an ask for access if that's okay with you. I'll read it after I'm done tumblring


Okay, I have no idea how to grant you access specifically... So I set the doc to be viewable by anyone. =D
I feel kinda stupid not remembering to do that. xD
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:32 am

Can you write up a little introduction for your story? It would really help.

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby The Jack » Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:41 am

Arcane_Scroll wrote:Can you write up a little introduction for your story? It would really help.


Hm. What kind of introduction? À la what Kkat did?
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby Kashin » Sat Nov 26, 2011 1:16 pm

"Description: Fallout. With ponies! Set in an alternate future, one pony must learn to survive in a blasted, poisoned land... and possibly, with the aid of friends made along the way, bring new light into the darkness of post-apocalyptic Equestria."

I figure he means something like this.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby The Jack » Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:30 pm

Kashin wrote:"Description: Fallout. With ponies! Set in an alternate future, one pony must learn to survive in a blasted, poisoned land... and possibly, with the aid of friends made along the way, bring new light into the darkness of post-apocalyptic Equestria."

I figure he means something like this.


Oh! Of course; I knew I had forgotten something.
I have those in the fimfic and ff.net docs though; I'll just copy it xD

I am horribad at synopsises though; that one in particular sounds übercheesy to me xD
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:07 am

Thanks, got it from your fanfiction.net page and updated the stories entry. I didn't see it at your fimfiction page.

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby The Jack » Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:23 am

Arcane_Scroll wrote:Thanks, got it from your fanfiction.net page and updated the stories entry. I didn't see it at your fimfiction page.


It should be there... But I literally made the fimfiction account for that story, so I probably did something wrong. I'll see if I can't fix it.
EDIT: There we go; fixed it! =D


Also, which story entry?
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

Postby Arcane_Scroll » Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:39 am

The story section of this site, I provide a link to every Fallout: Equestria side story I can find.

http://fallout-equestria.com/story/54

http://fallout-equestria.com/stories


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