"Best Laid plans" feedback.

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"Best Laid plans" feedback.

Post by Damhoof » Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:25 am

Its funny really. We started planning this fic back in august. Me and two of Damfoolbrony's pre-readers / all-round helpers. When he couldn't post his second chapter fast enough we decided to take matters into our own hands and now we 3 coauthor this fic we dubbed "Best Laid Plans."
http://poni.0au.de/story/1618/Fallout-E ... %26quot%3B

It is still very much in it's infancy. We are all inexperienced authors flexing our very small muscles and trying to stick so close to the cannon I get nerve issues at times. Well, at least it won't have a Goldenblood in it.

I'm usually not one to beg, and Mimez, No one / amongst others really help give me perspective along with what few comments I get, but one more place to go for feedback won't hurt. Please leave comments below if you have read the few chapters we have posted. Chapter one is a tad slow, but it picks up pace later. I promise I want very much to make it worth your time. xD
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Re: "Best Laid plans" feedback.

Post by Sgt Muffin » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:37 am

I remember hearing you guys discuss this... might give it a read after i finish my chapter.
Before the End is the story of an officer during the last two years of the war against the zebras. The story follows his journey through the Battle for Shattered Hoof Ridge, Battle of Stalliongrad and into the unknown.
Image More art, but it is over 200pix high.

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